The hardest part of a period piece is trying to stay true to the period, as best I can. I don't know the Victorian era as well as I would like to, so I'm not sure how well I created the world for this.
But it's SUPPOSED to be Victorian. So try to remember that as you read.
Naughty, naughty boy
Edmund Harrison pulled closed the
curtains, unbuttoning the collar of his shirt as he did. One by one,
he closed off the sight of passers by, of the workers on the streets
and the paupers in the gutters. He removed his cuff links, placed
them with his watch in a bowl by the door. He turned down the
lanterns, leaving the room dark.
As it should be. Such things are best
done in the darkness of a man's home, away from prying eyes. Away
from examination, away from judgment.
Edmund removed his vest, unfastened
his pants, and tossed his shirt aside. The help would pick up after
him, as they always did. But for right now, he knew he was alone. The
door was firmly shut. He had locked it, hadn't he?
No matter.
He sat back in a chair, cream by his
hand, as he began conjuring an image for his fantasy. He imagined the
woman, one of those selling themselves in the darkest parts of the
city. He would never go to one of those creatures himself, but still
he imagined them, the ladybirds. Pictured them in their naked
sexuality, in their open legs. The soft leather of boots to their
ankles, the bare stretch of leg shown through the slit of their
gowns.
He imagined the corset loosely holding
in the wares of the women, the lascivious smiles they would flash his
way as he walked by, trying to tempt him into parting with his coin
so that they would part their legs.
The cream was cool, the flesh hot, and
he closed his eyes as he began to do to himself what he would never
pay a woman to do for him.
Edmund groaned to himself, changed his
position to one more comfortable, and let his mind flow down the
dirty streets, up the oft-opened legs to the prize those women so
eagerly sell to any who can afford it.
He felt the pleasure starting to rise
in his body, started to feel himself float upwards towards the
crescendo of pleasure. He was focused so far inward that he did not
hear the door unlatch. He did not see the sudden blast of light as
the door opened and let in the light from the hall.
It wasn't until Minerva let out her
scream that he had any idea she was even there. He let himself go and
sprang to his feet.
“I can-”
She held up a hand. “No,” she
said. “No, I do not believe that you can. I see quite clearly what
you are doing, you awful boy. I see quite clearly indeed.” She
shook her head. “Disgusting.”
He moved to cover his nakedness. She
slapped him across the face. “You have done more than enough
touching yourself, I think. Put your hands at your sides.”
Edmund lowered his hands. Minerva
reached out and grabbed him by his erection, using it as a leash as
she lead him through the house.
She walked through the house, past one
open window after another. He glanced out to see what he could of the
street, certain there were people watching, people laughing at him.
But they were moving too fast. Too fast for him to make out any
details. All he could do was follow where she pulled him, certain
that he was being seen, dragged naked through the house. He knew they
would talk about it. The shame burned in him.
When she finally got him to the
kitchen, she let him go, tossing him chest first against the counter.
He gasped for breath, and she looped twine around his wrists, tying
them tight. The smells of spices, of herbs and of cooked meat,
drowned out the smell of the cream on his lower parts. He heard the
sound of metal as a knife was drawn from a block.
“You have brought such shame upon
yourself and this household,” she said. “By all rights, I should
make you a eunuch, so that you can live your days remembering the
price of shame.”
He whimpered and struggled against the
rope, feeling it dig into his skin.
She slapped him across his bare ass
with her hand. “Oh, do hold still, you silly boy,” she said. “I'm
not going to cut it off. One mistake is not irreversible. And you did
show at least some decorum. Though why you left your door unlocked is
a mystery to me.”
“I thought I had locked it,”
Edmund said.
She slapped his bottom again. Then he
heard the knife moving, carving at something. “Quiet,” she said.
“If you had locked it, I would not have intruded. I would never
have known. In fact, I'm sure you have done such hideous acts before.
Haven't you?” She spanked him again. “Haven't you?”
The hit brought a tear to his eye, and
he nodded, not trusting himself to speak.
“So then you left the door unlocked
on purpose. Or so it stands to reason. And why would you do such a
thing?” He heard another swipe of the knife, saw something small
fly past his field of vision.
“You must have wanted to be caught.
Which means you wanted to be punished.”
She laughed, spanked him again. The
skin on his bottom was burning, and he felt his leg muscles tighten.
The next hit stung, but not as badly.
“Why though?” she asked, smacking
him again, in an upward motion that barely clipped his skin. “Why
would you want me to be punished?”
He pulled against his bonds, waiting
for the next hit. He felt a gentle rustle of cloth against his bare
backside. He heard her humming softly as she carved something. He
took a breath in through his nose, realizing that one scent was
stronger than the others. A scent that was growing stronger and
stronger with each slide of the knife as she carved -something.
He took another smell, and she
laughed.
“Yes,” she said. “I see you
recognize the smell..”
She rubbed his already stinging
bottom. Then he felt as she pressed a bit of butter against him,
between the cheeks of his ass. She chuckled at his whimper.
Then came the pressure. The pressure
as she slid the long piece of ginger into his ass.
He shook his head as she pressed.
“Please,” he said. “Please no.”
She laughed. “Begging,” she said.
“I like that. But it will bring you no mercy. You deserve no mercy.
You want none.” She pushed it deeper in. The burning began. “And
so I shall give you none.”
She slapped his ass again, and he
tried to tighten up and absorb the pain. But as soon as he did, as
soon as he tightened, the fire inside his rear flared up. The pain
tore at him, and tears flowed down his face. “Please,” he said.
It was the only word he could manage. “Please.”
She spanked him again. He gasped.
She spanked again. She laughed.
Then she walked around, leaving the
ginger inside him, letting the burning continue.
She bent down so her eyes were level
with his. “If you remain relaxed back there,” she said, “It
will not be as bad. The more you tense, the sharper the burn. Take
your punishment as you are meant to. I will remove it when I am
finished. Tell me you understand.”
He nodded.
“Say that you do.”
“I--” he whimpered, shifted his
feet, trying to find a position that didn't hurt, that made the
burning go away. But there was none. There was no place he could
stand, no distance he could set his feet. As long as the ginger was
inside him, it burned. Burned.
“Say that you understand,” she
said.
“Please.”
She grabbed his chin, pulled his face
up to look into hers. “Say it,” she said.
“I,” he took another breath. “I
understand.”
She smiled. “Excellent.”
She took up a potato and sliced it in
half. One half she put into his mouth. “Bite on that if you think
it will help, you disgusting filth.” The other half she put on his
back. He felt her press something into the potato, then heard a faint
hiss. A drop of hot wax hit his skin, and he winced.
“You must hold out until the candle
burns down,” she said. “If it goes out because you moved, I will
be forced to start over.” She patted him on the head. “So do hold
still, unless you want me to
start over.”
The
first swat was with her hand. He tried to stay relaxed, stopping his
legs and his ass from tensing, trying to minimize the burning. He
felt his whole body twitch, felt the potato slide to the side a bit.
She hit him again, and he twitched, making the potato slide a bit
more. The third hit made him scream into the half potato in his
mouth, made him tense and jerk, made the ginger burn like a poker in
his rectum.
The
potato fell, and he heard her chiding laugh. “Looks like that's the
way it has to be,” she said. “We have to make sure it will stay,
don't we?”
He
bit through the potato as she poured hot wax on his back. It fell to
the floor, and he spat out what was in his mouth. He screamed at the
sensation of the hot wax pooling between his shoulder blades, was
still groaning when she pushed the candle into the pool of wax.
“We
shall have to start again, yes?”
She
stepped away for a little while, the hot wax slowly cooling around
the candle. Another drop his his skin, cooling quickly. But his ass
burned. The cheeks burned, the ginger burned on the inside.
He
heard her walk back, slapping something against her hand.
The
first swat of the paddle made him tense, which increased the burn.
The second swat had him crying again. He shook his head back and
forth as she hit him a third time, then a fourth. “Please no,” he
said. The words ran together “Pleasepleasepleasepleaseplease.”
She
laughed and hit him again.
“Quiet,”
she said. “Take your punishment like a man.” Another swat.
He
was sobbing. She reached down between his legs and turned the ginger,
bringing a whole new burning sensation. She laughed, and he cried.
“Take
it,” she said. “The candle will burn out soon.” Swat. “Take
the punishment you know you deserve.” Swat. “You are a filthy
creature.” Swat. “Disgusting.” Swat. “You want to be
punished. You love being punished.” Swat.
She
stepped back from him, rubbing a gentle hand on his burning skin.
“You do love it. Say that you love it.”
He
whimpered.
“Tell
me you love it when I paddle you,” she said. “Tell me.”
He
shook his head as she hit him again and again.
“Tell
me,” she said.
“Tell
me or I'll stop.”
Hello! Thanks for doing this :3 I really enjoyed that. I think you did a great job setting up the scene as well as abiding by the time period. ^.^
ReplyDeleteThank you Mistress Lori For advising me too find a story.
DeleteI enjoyed most of it.
That's a strange half-compliment. I do always appreciate Mistress Lori and her support though.
DeleteWhat did you not enjoy?
I think this was absolutely wonderful, really. Really enjoyed it!
ReplyDeletenice...it was refreshing to read :) you know i like dominant women and getting pleasure from the pain inflicted upon man....cool ass story...well it was hot ass for him....
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