Thursday, February 7, 2013

Another Grimm tale

Today's story is based on a game invented by the lovely, brilliant, talented, and terrifyingly cruel MiaHatter. It's called 'guess the safe word.'

Of course, she makes you guess the language too. But that's a whole other bag of worms.

For now....

Guess the Safe Word

Abigail bit her lip when the crop hit her skin. She whimpered in pain and clenched her eyes shut as slap after slap tore into her. She focused on not biting through her lip and tried to wrack her brain for the right word.

“Is it 'Jester'?”

He laughed at her. “No.”

“Can I ask a question about it?”

He stepped into her field of view and gave her a wicked smile. “If you do,” he said, “I get to give you five surface piercings.”

She sighed and nodded. “Question first.”

He nodded. “Of course.” It's not like she could go anywhere if she changed her mind.

“Is it a noun or a verb?”

“A noun,” he said. Then he stepped out of her view again.

Abigail whimpered when she felt the alcohol swab, winced when he pinched her back, let out a long groan as she felt him slide the needle in, along her skin, and back out.

“House?” she asked.

“Nope.”

He stuck a second needle in. This one felt like it was the size of a steel rebar, and maybe twenty feet long. She winced at the crunching sound as it poked its way free of her skin.

“Car?”

He laughed. “Not even close.”

The third needle went in, out, and then back in, leaving a bit of needle exposed as it crossed over her spine before plunging back in. He put the next two in just underneath, like he was sewing a corset in her skin.

He fairly skipped back around to the front, crouched down below her, looking up at her with that same sadistic smile. “If I can whip your back, you can ask another question.”

She shifted, feeling the needles in her back. It made her wince. But she nodded.

“First the whip,” he said, holding up a hand to stop her from asking. His eyes darted to her clenched fist, made sure the red cloth was still in there. Then he skipped away.

The first hit was a hard one, and she screamed from the pain. It felt like the needles were being ripped out through her skin, the hard way. Like he was hitting her with a bat, bending the needles while they were still inside her. The next hit was also hard, but he dragged the flogger down her back after hitting her, letting her feel the individual strands of leather as they slid along. It made her twitch, which made the needles hurt all the more.

“Parrot?”

He didn't answer. He just hit her again. She whimpered and let out a bit of a sob. She looked up at her hand and came close to opening it. But she didn't. She could handle this. She could handle whatever he wanted to throw at her.

Another hit, and Abigail was sure that he was, in fact, bending the needles that were already through her skin. She felt them pulling at her skin, and imagined it standing up, as if it was starting to peel away from her body. Not a pleasant image.

“Banana?”

He laughed again. “Wait your turn,” he said. “And no.”

He hit her a few more times, then ran his hand gently down her back, flicking at the needles and making them twitch inside her. She made a gasp of pain, and saw stars. The stars cleared and he was there, in front of her, still smiling.

“Person, place, or thing?” She asked.

He scratched his chin for a few seconds. Then he bent over and picked up a needle, opened its sterile packaging. “Person,” he said. Then he started scratching at her chin with the needle.

She whimpered and tried not to move. It felt like a cat scratch, or like a tattoo needle. Only not nearly as bad. He was slow, he was careful. Probably didn't even break the skin. He slowly dragged the needle down her body, scraping bit by bit, watching her squirm. Laughing at her pain.

Abigail tried to hold on, tried to ignore the sensation, focusing instead on the pain in her back.

Then he pierced her nipple with the needle and left it there.

When she was able to breathe again, he was gone, back behind her again. He laughed, mocking.

“I told you it would look good,” he said.

Abigail looked down at her left breast, at the needle sicking through her nipple. He wasn't wrong, but she didn't want to admit it. “Is it Arthur?”

“No,” he said, pushing a speculum up between her legs. She groaned as he opened it, forcing her wider than could possibly be comfortable. “But it is a name.”

“I didn't ask.”

“And I won't make you pay for it,” he said. Then she felt him pushing something up inside her. Something that felt a lot sharper than it was.

She knew what he was putting inside her. When he showed it to her, she'd asked what it was. It looked like a spiked blowfish. He assured her it was sterile, even dunking it in rubbing alcohol while she could still watch. She'd squeezed it in her hand first, and so she knew first hand that the spines weren't sharp enough to do any real damage.

But as he pushed it up inside her, she wondered. She worried.

When he took out the speculum, letting her close up around the spikes, she screamed.

“Brian?”

“Nope.”

“Jeff?”

“Way off.”

He gave her ass a quick slap. She jerked, and the thing inside her stabbed more forcefully.

“Guinevere?”

“Better,” he said. “But still wrong.”

She heard him snicker, and was about to ask why, when the thing inside her started to vibrate. She moaned in pleasure even as she winced at the pain.

She was getting dizzy as the sensations flowed all over her. She fought against the desire to just float on the sensations. She knew she needed to focus. Needed to guess.

“Lancelot?”

He poked the sole of her feet with a bundle of bamboo shoots. Not sharp enough to pierce skin, but that didn't stop them from hurting.

“Wrong story,” he said. Then he poked her again, dragged the bamboo along her skin.

She moaned again, then felt something cold on her ass. Cold and liquid. She shook her head. “No,” she said. “Please no.”

He laughed. “Now you're way off track,” he said.

He slid the tip of his cock into her ass, and she groaned. The thing inside her kept vibrating, but had less space to move around in. It felt like she was being shredded from the inside.

He pushed in a bit harder, going a bit deeper.

“Cinderella!” she shouted.

He pushed farther, and she felt like she was being shredded and torn apart.

“Nope.”

He flicked the needles in her skin. She screamed. Almost let go of the cloth.

“Grimm.”

He twisted one of the needles, just a tiny bit. She screamed again and began to sob.

Then he pushed in deeper, and turned the toy up to a higher setting. It felt like the world was soaring around her, offering her a chance to float if she would only let go. If she would just let herself ride the endorphins.

She almost did. She almost gave up right then and there. But he laughed. He laughed, and she knew she couldn't just give in.

He pushed deeper into her ass, almost all the way in. Deep enough that there would be no point in making him stop. He slid out a bit, then pushed in again. She groaned. He grunted.

The name had to be important. Had to matter. When was a name important?

Guessing Grimm had upset him. He wasn't taunting her anymore; didn't want to give her any more clues.

He pulled out and pushed all the way in. She yelped, and knew that she couldn't stop him anymore.

The deal was that she had three hours. Three hours to guess. Why was that important? Why did that matter?

He slapped her ass, making her whole body shake, making the pain scream at her from all over.

He flicked the needles, one by one, then twisted the one in her nipple. She felt it turning inside, but that didn't add to the pain. It was just a sensation. Just a spinning needle.

Spinning needle.

She laughed.

He stopped moving. “What is it?”

“Rumpelstiltskin,” she said. “It's Rumpelstiltskin.”

She felt his lips on the back of her neck as he kissed her, as he pulled himself out of her ass.

“That's right,” he said. “That's the safe word. Good guess.”

She dropped her head, let the endorphins take over, let herself just experience the sensation.

“Not a guess,” she said, her voice dreamy and far away. “Good hints.”

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